04 May 2008 @ 08:08 am
Bali, Part Six, Brian/Justin futuristic AU  
Captain Brian Kinney's mission is complicated by his forbidden attraction to his new helo pilot as they set out to find and sink a submarine used by a cartel to hit friendly shipping in the south seas.


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Title: Bali
Six
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Brian/Justin, Gus/Brandon AU
betas: [info]furriboots
Warnings: occasional graphic violence.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
A/n: short story written for the [info]neverenough_bj challenge of 'The Problem with Brandon'.
Photos from Bali from 'Tropical Interiors.' Click on the thumbnail to see it full-sized.
Includes the prompt 'Danger Zone' from [info]tamingthemuse.

I actually lost this chapter on Friday by accident and had to rewrite it, but I think this version is better now. And yes, I know it's short, but I needed to structure it this way.

Memorable entries for Bali


Previously:

Brian fitted the little net around his waist and between his legs, closing the links. It immediately shaped itself to Justin's body, cupping his balls, just penetrating him in the back and wrapping around his cock.

"Unfortunately you can't come now unless I allow it," Brian reminded Justin.

"I guess I won't be able to hook up here in Bali," Justin observed dryly.

"No, but I thought." Brian cleared his throat. "Come home with me."

"Oh." Justin got off the bed, seeing the net had made itself invisible now. He'd heard it was capable of amplifying feeling as well as controlling it. He couldn't wait to--

"Your home?"

"I want to check on Gus," Brian said, pulling Justin onto his lap. "But tonight I promise to show you the pleasure enhancer on the net." Kiss. Justin whimpered because he was hard, needy, and he could tell Brian was going to make him wait.

Brian's index finger brushed the tip of Justin's cock, circling. Slow. "Come home with me, Kitten."


Kinney Balinese coffee plantation, 2449 Hours; June 11, 2047



"It's all right." Gus blinked, squeezing his eyes shut. He couldn't--

"You just got a little dizzy when you--"

"I'll be fine," Gus muttered, woozy.

He was sitting next to the fountain in Brandon's garden. Now they were alone, the two Bali who had serviced them gone.

Brandon studied Gus's face in the flickering lantern light, his face distantly concerned.

Gus hated being the recipient of such a look, and yet... attention.

Brandon didn't seem to mind him hanging around for three quarters of the white sun drenched day.

"I think the bleeding's stopped."

Gus had a gash on the side of his head from hitting the stone wall when he climaxed. He'd never been so excited, holding Brandon's gaze as they were both sucked off.

"I'll walk you back to the house."

"Can't I stay with you?"

"Gus, I'm going to lose my job over you." Brandon pushed back some of Gus's tousled dark hair.

"Fine, I'll--"

"No." Brandon stood and held out a large palm. "Stay. Might as well."

Gus's muscles relaxed. His dick was still sensitive from his orgasm, but it twitched at Brandon's possible welcome.

"I knew as soon as I saw you, you'd fuck up my life."

Gus gave a small grin. "Yeah?"

"Yeah."

Brandon guided Gus carefully up the stairs to his sleeping loft.

Hand on the driftwood railing where some lit votives were suspended, Gus stared at a sketch of a blond with long, untamed hair and a frilly shirt.

"That's you?"

Brandon touched the canvas, his fingers revisiting an old friend. "A gift after a very nice weekend. Justin. Some kind of sailor..."

...

"Your house is..." Big. Not what I'm ready for. "Uh, beautiful," Justin said, waiting as Brian waved a crystal key and the plantation double doors opened.

"I've hardly spent any time here." Brian looked at Justin's upturned face in the entrance way light and experienced a strange impulse. He'd probably throw his back out or some Goddamned thing if he--

What the fuck? No one was here to see them and it was his fucking house.

"...Brian!" Justin's grip around his neck as his feet dangled and Brian stood there, adjusting to more than Justin's weight.

"What? It'll be quicker if I carry you to bed. You don't know the floor plan." Brian swallowed before he said... Christ. It had to be because Justin had almost been shot down.

Justin stroked the white streak through his older lover's hair. "You can and I appreciate being the recipient."

Brian kissed Justin, losing himself in slutty welcome. "Tour can wait."

Justin pulled Brian's palm down so he could cover the aching penis he now controlled through the net Justin had agreed to wear. "I need you. Please."

Fat, hard drops of rain suddenly pelted the windows which shuddered with the proximity of thunder. The light went out. Sudden darkness.

"I hope that's not an omen for our weekend," Justin said, giving a rueful laugh.

"Just a tropical storm," Brian said.

"I know," Justin's breath on his lips. Brian felt a sensation just above his ass, almost the tightness of coming.

...

Brandon watched as Gus stripped down to his boxers before he climbed in the bed, looking anywhere but at Brandon.

Brandon gave Gus a laconic look. "You might as well be up at the house."

Gus let out a deep breath. "Nervous."

"Okay." Brandon closed his eyes.

Rain suddenly hit the roof, making the grass seethe above them. Stray drops penetrated.

The lights in the hut went off and only candle light that lived in the votives on the stairs lit the sudden abyss.

Brandon half expected the timid palm that found his chest.

...

Justin's link shrilled.

Brian put him down, face impassive.

Justin answered it, listening. "I understand. Yes, Sir." He cut the link and looked at Brian.

"Back to the danger zone. The replacement parts for the helo on Hillary will take another week, but they need me to fly ASW duty off the cruiser Fitswilliam."

Brian nodded.

"You knew?"

"I'm your skipper."

"It's that easy to...?"

Brian grasped the back of Justin's neck firmly.

Justin huffed, "Okay, it's not that easy."

"If you get killed, you won't get your spanking with a rolled up newspaper," Brian warned gruffly.

Justin felt a sharp sensation in his throat.

"I have been fantasizing about that ever since I met you."

"I like the one where you're my slave."

Justin smiled, feeling better. Brian didn't want him to get killed. "That's shamelessly un-PC!"

"Name me one really good sexual fantasy that is PC, Taylor," Brian pointed out dryly. "What time do you leave?"

"After breakfast."

Brian took Justin's wrist and pulled him out onto the veranda. Beyond, rain fell in a shimmering wall.

"Run," Brian growled.

"...Brian?"

"Run and I'll catch you."

Heart picking up, Justin lurched off the veranda and into the dark.

Can't catch me, can't catch me! He laughed at the absurdity of the voice in his head, but the laughter dried when he looked over his shoulder and saw Brian illuminated by a flash of lightning. Hard faced. Intent gaze tracking Justin.

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ASW = anti-submarine warfare.

Bali, Part Seven
 
 
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odalis88[info]odalis88 on May 4th, 2008 03:17 pm (UTC)
THAT'S IT?! *Thud* Is it me, or was this chapter a lot shorter than the others?? *tries to wait patiently fore more*
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on May 4th, 2008 03:23 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]sjmpets on May 4th, 2008 03:19 pm (UTC)
i hope for justin's sake he does, but i have a feeling they'll be running into brandon and gus. that won't turn out good if it happens.
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on May 4th, 2008 03:29 pm (UTC) Expand
aschicca: QaF_B_Kinney[info]aschicca on May 4th, 2008 03:24 pm (UTC)
Oohhh so Brandon and Justin have a past! And now he's... well having an affair with Gus. Brian's son and Brian's Kitten... Brandon is in trouble. And not only for his job... *g*

Such and interesting development this chapter brought!
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on May 4th, 2008 04:40 pm (UTC) Expand
naroo_13[info]naroo_13 on May 4th, 2008 03:39 pm (UTC)
Thank you for the update. Can't wait to see what ahppens
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chiara1[info]chiara1 on May 4th, 2008 03:45 pm (UTC)
The tension is killer
Brandon and Justin......oh my.....I wonder which will cause the most commotion?? Brandon/Gus or Brandon/Justin. The combined fallout should be a sight to remember. The tension is killer. Need more, please. Thank you, thank you.


Chiara
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Re: The tension is killer - [info]jans_intentions on May 4th, 2008 05:43 pm (UTC) Expand
Claudia: [info]melancholia_clo on May 4th, 2008 03:52 pm (UTC)
Ohhhh *O*

Can I say the end of this chap leave me open mouth? Like this ---> *O*

You really sourprise me...this "game" Brian want do:Justin escapes and Brian have to chase him!I absolutely love it!!!♥♥

Can it be a metaphor about their relationship!? Justin is so withut bounds,free and looking for this pure pleasure moments and Brian is searching a way to bound Justin to himself.

I also love Justin thought about "Can't catch me, can't catch me" and than seeing Brian behind him.

Woman,I so love all this ♥♥ !!
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lucsmom: 204 kiss[info]lucsmom on May 4th, 2008 03:54 pm (UTC)
It was short, but good. Brandon made it into Justin's sketchpad. It's not bad enough that Brandon's lusting after Gus, but he's already been with Justin. Brian isn't going to take any of this well. When they all meet, there will be some major tension and not the good kind.

I chuckled when Gus hurt his head while getting off. That would be embarrassing, but Gus handled it pretty well.
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tdorian[info]tdorian on May 4th, 2008 03:55 pm (UTC)
eh eh Br,adon already "know Justin...interesting !! I bet that Brian will want to chase Brandon for Gus And Justin and it certainly won't end the smae way as his race for Justin...eh eh ! I'm happy you found your muse back for this one.Now I wait for Kinetic and Ice...Aida
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janes_membrane[info]janes_membrane on May 4th, 2008 04:10 pm (UTC)
Justin must really get around if he already got to Brandon. It sucks that the weekend got cut short.


Oh yeah, before I forget, I am getting into Gothic. RL has been so tiring these days that I couldn't find the time to comment on your recent stuff.
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on May 4th, 2008 05:54 pm (UTC) Expand
hudgirl[info]hudgirl on May 4th, 2008 04:20 pm (UTC)
THANK YOU....being needing this next epi of Bali. I do hope Brian is understanding of Brandon and what is hovering between him and Gus when he finds out. Shirls
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on May 4th, 2008 06:10 pm (UTC) Expand
kellie[info]ckrazykell4 on May 4th, 2008 04:37 pm (UTC)
Loved it, I'm waiting for some more. I especially loved the part:

"Run," Brian growled.

"...Brian?"

"Run and I'll catch you."

It shows how Brian will always be there for Justin.

*I hope you find your muse again*
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spike7451[info]spike7451 on May 4th, 2008 04:42 pm (UTC)
Good to see an update of this, you have so many wonderful fics for us to read at the moment and all different. Sooo, Justin and Brandon have a history. Brian is NOT going to like that and then when he finds out about Gus and Brandon, and he will, it's really going to hit the fan. Think it'll be more than his job that Brandon needs to worry about.Worried about Justin going to another ship, hope to hell he stays safe. Short chapter,but a good one.
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Little angel[info]little10 on May 4th, 2008 04:44 pm (UTC)
I love this story...
I like to see Gus with Brandon and I'm wondering what will happen when Brian find out about them!
And I can't wait to see Brandon's reaction the moment he will see Justin again..
Can't wait for more! :D
Kiss

Giulia
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on May 4th, 2008 06:14 pm (UTC) Expand
Blacknblue2[info]blacknblue2 on May 4th, 2008 05:12 pm (UTC)
I am really loving the Brandon/Gus dynamic here. I also love just how playful Brian is in this story. That's a side of him we don't usually get to see.
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on May 4th, 2008 06:14 pm (UTC) Expand
Justin's bitch[info]sanami276 on May 4th, 2008 05:18 pm (UTC)
Brandon's been with Justin, that definitely means trouble ;)
Lovely chapter, I love the tension between Brian and Justin. I surely hope we'll see what happens once Justin is caught :D

Btw, I have two icons from the images you suggested. I don't think you wanted them to be shareable since one has your name on it, so I didn't include them at my icon journal:

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Nefetiri Sian Nephele[info]redangelteflon on May 4th, 2008 05:22 pm (UTC)
YES! an Update!
I've been waiting for this one!

Keep it up!

(sorry that was a brief comment, my mind's been so busy lately that i've been barely coherent)
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velvetwhip: Gabrielle Spring by jans_intentions[info]velvetwhip on May 4th, 2008 05:26 pm (UTC)
Oh my stars! What a cliffhanger on so many levels! But I love it! This is really super! I know how tough it was for you, but you really got back into it in high style! Brava!


Gabrielle
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armandyouidiot[info]armandyouidiot on May 4th, 2008 05:33 pm (UTC)
Oh this is tantalizing. I love that Justin had Brandon in the past and did a sketch. Now the running in the rain, yeehaw!
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celeste3028: Tadzio[info]celeste3028 on May 4th, 2008 05:36 pm (UTC)
"I knew as soon as I saw you, you'd fuck up my life."

Reminds me of someone else *g*
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[info]trueila on May 4th, 2008 05:42 pm (UTC)
I hope that yor muse will love Bali again. It's beautiful story. Thank you
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pinkielephant[info]pinkielephant on May 4th, 2008 05:45 pm (UTC)
"A gift after a very nice weekend. Justin. Some kind of sailor..."


I knew it!! Okay, so I didn't, but I totally did after I read that quote. Spoooky..
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on May 4th, 2008 06:41 pm (UTC) Expand
eliriel: ( QAF ) Brian - pain management[info]eliriel1 on May 4th, 2008 06:18 pm (UTC)
This fic is interesting at each new chapter. It's hard work,but you do it.Brandon and Justin...why this surprised me ? I am dying to know what Brian will do, when he finds out that, and about Gus and Brandon . I loved the part where Brian is chasing Justin.He looks like a predator.It is thrilling.
I will love to read more .
Hugs, Jan.
Liri
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Ai: B - never part of the plan[info]badbadpixie on May 4th, 2008 06:23 pm (UTC)
Omg Omg Omg! Brandon is a former trick of Justin's!!! OH SHIT!

I can't wait for Brian to find out that fact - on top of the Brandon/Gus situation!

I'm so happy I took the time to play catch with this one! Thank you Jan, no matter how short. ;)
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there's beauty in the breakdown: brian victory![info]arlad on May 4th, 2008 06:31 pm (UTC)
Oh, YAY! I get computer time AND a Bali update! Good Sunday :) (and my new laptop should be arriving by the end of May. SCORE!)
I really, really loved this... it was short, but interesting and hot... and EEEP! Brandon knows Justin! (in a biblical sense, too!) Brian asking Justin to go home with him was huge, as was Brandon letting Gus stay... most interesting parallels. Awesome, Jan!
Hugs,
Arlad
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Cau: Cage[info]kauanna on May 4th, 2008 07:14 pm (UTC)
"Run," Brian growled.

"...Brian?"

"Run and I'll catch you."


Oh, my god, this is so adorable!! I wanna squeeze somebody’s cheek : )
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