30 April 2008 @ 10:52 am
Say the Word, "Feminine," Part Six, Brian/Justin  

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Title: Say the Word
Six: Prompt word for this chapter given to me by [info]litlemspowerful: Feminine
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Brian/Justin
beta: [info]furriboots
Disclaimer: Not mine.
An: AU in the style of pretty woman

Say the word: Advantageous by jans_intentions
Say the Word: Irreversible by jans_intentions.
Say the Word: Complications by jans_intentions.
Say the Word: Tempted by jans_intentions.
Say the Word: Comfort by jans_intentions.

Say the Word: Cherry Blossom by Litlemspowerful.
Say the Word: White Chocolate by Litlemspowerful.


Saturday morning, Brian opened the door of the loft, stared into Justin's eyes and then cupped his cheek, whispering, "How is your boyfriend?"

Justin's eyes stung at this gentleness. He was so confused about being here, doing this, wanting to do this.

"Better thanks," Justin said. "You didn't have to stay all night Tuesday."

Brian shrugged.

Flushing, Justin cleared his throat. Time to get down to business.
"So, how do you want me?" he continued, letting some coolness brush like fresh air between them.

I can't lose myself to him.

"Take your clothes off. When you're here with me, I don't want you wearing any."

Justin gave a jerky nod. He put down his small overnight bag and pulled his tee shirt over his head.

Brian folded his arms and leaned against one of the loft pillars, making no pretense he wasn't going to watch--and enjoy--Justin removing his clothing.

When Justin was nude, he looked around the room under his eyelashes, a little shy under Brian's unsubtle gaze.

"Bend over the couch a moment, I want to check something."

"Um. Okay." Justin obeyed. He felt the brush of Brian's hands on his ass, felt Brian spread his ass cheeks.

Now?!

"Waxed." A brush of fingers on the back of his balls. "But there's a little stubble around--"

"Yeah, I was going to--"

Brian ran a hand down Justin's spine.

Justin shivered.

"You can take care of that now."

The hand was gone.

Brian had stepped away. He obviously wasn't going to take what he'd bought and paid for.

Yet.

...

Sitting on a heated finely made Egyptian cotton terry cloth towel, Justin dipped his razor into soapy water again.

Brian was on the other side of the couch, slouched, papers on his lap from work. Every now and then he looked up at the soft tinkle of water, watching Justin shave around his sex.

...

Justin rubbed a waxy cream into his freshly exposed skin, conscious of Brian's gaze.

"Open your legs a little wider," the soft, inevitable command.

Color high in his cheeks, Justin pulled his thighs open with his palms.

Brian's foot.

Lifting Justin's balls gently, then stroking the crease between Justin's sex and his inner thigh.

"I never had a thing for feet," Justin said.

"My feet. Your boyfriend doesn't do this with you?"

"...No."

"Good." A little smile.

"Are you going to...?"

"No hurry. When you want it, you'll ask me."

Justin chewed his lip. Shit.

"Tell me what you think when I play with you this way?" Brian's foot, circles of comfort, circles of stimulation on Justin's leg. His erection flexed, huge and swollen, catching Brian's gaze, hungry for Brian's care.

Basking. Painful excitement. Knowing that if he wanted relief, Brian would offer it only on his terms.

He rubbed the collar around his neck. Control.

"...Uh, it's almost insulting. Casual. You can't be bothered to touch me with your hands, your mouth. I'm like a little pet you see to."

Brian nodded. "I want you to know your place."

"So I don't get close enough to hurt you?"

...

Brian snapped on the diamond collar. "The last rule is if I get hard, you take care of it. Mouth or ass."

Brian's hand feathering through Justin's hair.

"Ruthless."

"I prefer to see it as being in control of the situation." Brian nodded to the far side of the loft where tall windows were covered in filmy white curtains. "I set up an easel. Supplies."

"...Brian." Justin climbed to his feet. Walked over, conscious he was eye candy, bare ass, to his patron. He ran a hand over the canvases, saw expensive paints spilling out of black cloth bags (Brian obviously disdained using plastic--probably for aesthetic reasons rather than environmental ones).

Quietly, "Do you like it?"

Justin smiled over his shoulder, letting his pleasure shine in his eyes. Being there for him the night Ben got sick, and now this...?

"Then come over here and show your gratitude. I got hard watching you walk across the room."

...

He dropped to his knees in front of Brian, pushing open his legs, eyes down, color high on his cheeks. He opened Brian's pants and pulled him out, leaning down to nuzzle Brian's penis almost affectionately.

Maybe Brian wanted this to be all business, but Justin wanted to give him something more than servicing.

Brian groaned and a second later a large warm palm clenched over Justin's skull, pressure carefully measured.

Justin smiled and laid a line of kisses like an arrow along Brian's penis.

On his knees, he cupped Brian's balls, squeezing, aware of who had the power now.

...

Justin sat up on the over sized pillows Brian had spread out in the great room. He rubbed his face and looked over at Brian's bedroom. The shutters were closed and it was dark. Brian must finally have stopped working and gone to bed.

Justin had fallen asleep promptly at ten, worn out from the week with Ben and his classes.

His body was still a little tender. Achy and unsatisfied.

Ask me, Justin.

He shoved off the blanket and got up to get a glass of water. One of the lights was still on, providing soft gray ambiance. He leaned against the counter, noticing a spiral staircase behind the dining room table.

He put down his glass and then with a glance at Brian's bedroom, ghosted over to it.

Hand on a steel rung, he hesitated, peering into the darkness below.

...

"Like it?" Brian's soft voice.

Justin looked up from where he'd been looking at erotic illustrations in an elaborately embossed leather book.

"Ben told me he played with bondage before..."

Brian crossed his muscled arms, leaning against the staircase. "It's a playroom."

Justin looked around at rough red frescoed walls, showing Greek men with their boys. The floor was hardwood. There was a tall palm tree by one window, which was covered by a wooden plantation shutter.

The cot to one side vaguely resembled a medical hospital bed. Cabinets stood along one wall, exotic items gleaming softly behind glass.

And there were other things, pieces of wooden and black leather furniture Justin only vaguely understood were for deeper play. He avoided looking at them.

His fingers grazed the folds of a strangely feminine hunk of rough cut garnet. "This place...you created it for him, didn't you? The guy who left you."

Brian's jaw hardened.

"I still use it sometimes."

Justin licked his lips, feeling a hot wash of want. Brian.

Brian went over to a closet and opened it, peeling off his silk pajama bottoms and replacing them with black leather drawstring pants. He left the crotch untied, so his penis hung, semi-erect, like dark, forbidden fruit.

He reached down and pulled on tall black leather boots before going to the cabinet and opening it, removing a crystal flask.

"You need relief," he said. "Let me give it to you, Justin. Don't..." He huffed out an exasperated breath. "Don't fight me."

Justin regarded Brian calmly before climbing to his feet. He walked over and knelt in front of him.

"You have no idea how fucking hot it is when you do that," Brian said, cupping Justin's face.

"If I ask you to help me get off, will you answer one question?"

Brian continued to caress Justin's hair. "Depends on the question."

"Why did he leave you?"

Brian's gaze moved around the room, weighing. "He got more and more into playing his role. Lost himself in being my submissive."

"Forgot to talk to Brian? To see Brian?"

Brian's lips tightened but he didn't speak.

Justin reached up and took Brian's hand, calling back his attention. "I won't do that."

...

Brian splashed cedar oil over his leather covered calf.

He took Justin's hand, guiding him so he was kneeling as high as he could, his legs slightly spread.

Brian's black boot entered the delta of Justin's open thighs. Cool, slick oil brushed against Justin's aching fullness.

A little humiliation can feel good.

"Look up at me."

Arms around Brian's leg, body thrusting, Justin held Brian's gaze as he humped his leg.

Brian's pupils were huge, darkness that Justin drowned in, a thumb grazing his open, panting lips as he, God, he didn't care about how he must look, about what he was doing.

It felt--

"Come for me, Justin," Brian ordered calmly.

The hot splash of relief. Whimpering--

And then Brian was beside him, holding him as he trembled, as his heart pounded like a horse that had broken loose, broken free.

"I've never been so wild as I am with you," Justin confessed.

Brian rubbed his thumb against Justin's lips before tenderly kissing them. "I love you wild. I love you free."

"And I'll make you a little less lonely," Justin said, pushing.

Brian leaned his forehead against Justin's. "All right," he acquiesced.

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Say the Word: Play, Part Seven
 
 
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naroo_13[info]naroo_13 on April 30th, 2008 06:06 pm (UTC)
I like this...they are taking care of each other.
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on April 30th, 2008 06:43 pm (UTC) Expand
litlemspowerful: bj good boy[info]litlemspowerful on April 30th, 2008 06:15 pm (UTC)
This was stunningly beautiful, powerful and erotic. Your writing ability, the way in which you express the characters, NEVER ceases to amaze or thrill me. YOU are wild and free and I love that about you, my dear.

I'm thoroughly excited for the next chapter, partner. :)

xo
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on April 30th, 2008 06:45 pm (UTC) Expand
velvetwhip: Gabrielle Spring by jans_intentions[info]velvetwhip on April 30th, 2008 06:24 pm (UTC)
This is really involving! I like the way the dynamics are shifting and the power is transfering back and forth. Great work, hon! Thanks for brightening my day with this terrific story!


Gabrielle
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on April 30th, 2008 06:46 pm (UTC) Expand
Claudia: stock flower[info]melancholia_clo on April 30th, 2008 06:39 pm (UTC)
Ohh!!! *o*

I'm entagled.

I admit this is a particular theme for me: the domn/submissive kind of sexual experience. And I think I can't yet completly understand it but I think it's an other intersting face of living sex and affection. Besides I also think in these couples both members have power and are in subjugation by the other. Both roles have more meanings.

Eros is such a strong energy.He do what he want for express himself. *o*

I love the way Justin and Brian live free and wild their Eros'impulse.
And I love Justin's internal conflict and Brian who is like spellbound by Justin.
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(Anonymous) on April 30th, 2008 06:43 pm (UTC)
it was so soft... even if it's porn

I want to know more about Brian's ex and is it bad that i want Ben to dissapear?

So good!
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on April 30th, 2008 07:22 pm (UTC) Expand
tdorian[info]tdorian on April 30th, 2008 06:51 pm (UTC)
you know that you have this incredible talent to describe damaged people ? It always totally amaze me.I'm not sure if you'll go further in the story of the man who left Brian (mysteries are always good !)but it gives a fragility to Brian that is really new.Great chapter.Aida
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Tena: qaf french kiss[info]faramirhaldir on April 30th, 2008 06:53 pm (UTC)
Hmmm...really good chapter. I really find the D/s relationships intriguing and look forward to seeing where you take them. The whole power dynamic is just really amazing and exciting. I have a feeling brian is going to keep a close eye as to not let Justin "lose" himself.

*hugs*
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on April 30th, 2008 07:24 pm (UTC) Expand
sunshine63: sunshine's shower[info]sunshine63 on April 30th, 2008 07:04 pm (UTC)
Ben.... who's Ben?!?!!? I bet Justin will be wondering soon... Brian is filling his thoughts and his life, slowly... the way you described the sex scene is amazing, not too many words, but very detailed and complete and full of eroticism. the last words "And I'll make you a little less lonely" sound like a beautiful promise...
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on April 30th, 2008 07:41 pm (UTC) Expand
[info]sheira66 on April 30th, 2008 07:05 pm (UTC)
Poor Brian....always so alone no matter the fic...makes my heart break...
hugs
sheira
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on April 30th, 2008 07:42 pm (UTC) Expand
Dogs have owners, Cats have staff...: Mist purple[info]furriboots on April 30th, 2008 07:10 pm (UTC)
Wow! Very, very erotic piece of writing. You have created such a sensuous atmosphere which is heighten by all the elaborate details of the playroom and Brian's black leather pants and boots (be still my heart).

Now you know that I really like Ben but I must admit that I would like Justin to be able to put himself completely in Brian's care without feeling as if he is betraying Ben and I would love to see Brian be able to admit that Justin is deeply important to him. Poor Brian who is so scarred by his previous experience that he must pretend that he is emotionally removed in order to protect himself.

Great chapter.
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on April 30th, 2008 07:48 pm (UTC) Expand
Izzy[info]blue_sunrises on April 30th, 2008 07:32 pm (UTC)
This was quite lovely, very hot but so sweet too. I like this Brian very much, he seems to accept the idea of opening up a little better than canon Brian.

Simply wonderful. Can't wait for more!

xoxoxo Izzy
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camjakefan[info]camjakefan on April 30th, 2008 07:42 pm (UTC)
I love this/ i like how in control Brian is and how much Justin wants to give in to Brian but is afraid to. I like the idea of Brian watching him and wanting him but won't do anything until he asks for it Great job I can't wait to see what happens next.
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on April 30th, 2008 10:35 pm (UTC) Expand
rosy5000: BJ ChaCha Foreheads[info]rosy5000 on April 30th, 2008 07:44 pm (UTC)
This was so incredibly intense, hot, and erotic! And I loved that Brian asked how Ben was as soon as Justin arrived.

Brian just seems so lonely and Justin's confused/conflicted about how he feels about Brian.

That ending was a beautiful promise between the two.
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Cau: GRdesenho[info]kauanna on April 30th, 2008 08:10 pm (UTC)
Sooooooo sexy, soooo involving, soooo wonderful! Have no words to say how much I'm enjoying this.
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lucsmom: B/J 202[info]lucsmom on April 30th, 2008 08:24 pm (UTC)
I was really moved by this chapter. They are both so needy and so incomplete. They need each other, but are still a little leery of letting go.

I know Justin loves Ben, but it isn't the kind of mad, passionate love he truly desires. Brian was hurt pretty bad so he needs to maintain control. They both need to let go.
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shadownyc: paddies  - 207 entwined[info]shadownyc on April 30th, 2008 08:32 pm (UTC)
"And I'll make you a little less lonely,"

That is such a beautiful way to express love.

Seeing the true feelings growing between these two is both HOT and lovely.

Fabulous chapter!!!
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on April 30th, 2008 10:37 pm (UTC) Expand
starlightbj: pic#73091139[info]starlightbj on April 30th, 2008 08:54 pm (UTC)
They're getting closer - that's good. Interesting about Brian's ex getting lost in being his sub. Brian's playroom sounds delicious. ;)

Great chapter, things are moving along for them.
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aschicca: QaF_B-J intimacy[info]aschicca on April 30th, 2008 08:55 pm (UTC)
I love the way you're playing with this, balancing the power between the two of them so subtly and yet so evidently. Brian has control of certain things, certain aspects of their "relationship"; Justin already has, and I suspect he'll gain more and more as things progress, control over Brian's emotions....

This story is erotic, intriguing and touching at the same time. Really well builted :)
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randysgirl_645[info]randysgirl_645 on April 30th, 2008 09:28 pm (UTC)
*fans herself* that was freaking hot :D I also like that the connection is growing :)
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eliriel: ( QAF ) B/J smooshnose[info]eliriel1 on April 30th, 2008 09:56 pm (UTC)
This is beautiful,erotic, and hot as hell.You always can make the visual so clear, that I can see and feel everything.I love how they have equality in their relationship.They change control and this make things interesting.
This is beautifully written.
Thanks,
Liri
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pyewackets_paws[info]pyewackets_paws on April 30th, 2008 10:18 pm (UTC)
I'm having a hard time thinking of anything more eloquent to say than, "GUH".

I'd like to think that that says it all. MORE PLEASE.

Huh, I think I may have just discovered one of my kinks. Thanks Jan!
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armandyouidiot[info]armandyouidiot on April 30th, 2008 10:22 pm (UTC)
I was worried when I saw the prompt word but I like how you used it. You are always surprising!
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[info]nblanchard70 on April 30th, 2008 10:33 pm (UTC)
Chapter Six - Feminine
I'm very curious about Brian's past relationship and I expect we will soon learn more about it as this series continues. I'm really liking the give/take occurring between Brian/Justin as well as the incredible eroticism as they get to know each other...:)

Damn --- this series is just so damned addictive!!!

Nicole
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Re: Chapter Six - Feminine - [info]jans_intentions on April 30th, 2008 11:06 pm (UTC) Expand
Ann[info]anneli9 on April 30th, 2008 10:38 pm (UTC)
You just never ceases to amaze me with your writing! This chapter is so powerful,and so passion filled, even if the passion is kind of subtle. I love that you bring in the dom/sub aspect in this, it`s really exciting. The dynamic between the characters is so special. The power keeps changing between them. But I do see Justin as the stronger one, no matter if he`s being the submissive here. I can see Brian falling for Justin, and craving him more and more. I hope he won`t be hurt. You have totally captivated me with this, I can`t wait for more!:) Thank you!
Ann
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alina_kotik[info]alina_kotik on April 30th, 2008 10:55 pm (UTC)
Great power dynamics, excellent characterization with just a few words, and lovely images, so hot! A wonderful story, I enjoy every chapter.
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