14 March 2008 @ 09:19 am
Say the Word, "Advantageous," Brian/Justin  
[info]litlemspowerful and I are playing a naughty game of ping pong using word prompts and Brian/Justin.


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Title: Say the Word
One: "Advantageous" prompt word given to [info]jans_intentions by [info]litlemspowerful.
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Brian/Justin
beta: [info]furriboots
Summary: Justin pleases his new client in a unique fashion.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

I am working on what I think will be the last chapter of Innocence but took some time out to write my first piece for a prompt given to me by [info]litlemspowerful. We thought it would be fun to play with prompts and challenge each other for a while.

Say the Word: Cherry Blossom by Litlemspowerful.


"At my feet," the Sap insisted, pushing Justin so he sat on his bare ass on the limo floor.

"If we get in a car accident, you could be fined," Justin pointed out.

The Sap shook his head. "Still a mouthy little boy. Don't try it on this next client. Keep your eyes down and your mouth shut. Unless he wants you to suck him off. We both know you love doing that, don't you?"

Justin flushed.

"Do a good job pleasing him tonight and I'll double your fee."

Justin closed his eyes, reminding himself that this wasn't so different from the dancing he'd done Babylon...which had progressed to stripping at the Sap's parties...and finally sucking off men the Sap wanted to offer a special treat.

Justin drew the line at doing anything more and he was careful to avoid the drugs that the Sap and his friends plied him with.

He reminded himself it was only one night a week. At class tomorrow afternoon, he would not think about this...

...

A tall brunet had to bend deeply to climb into the car a few minutes later. The Sap's special client. He owned his own ad agency or something. Justin observed him from under lowered lashes.

His face flamed with embarrassment when the Sap used his boot to rub Justin's trussed up sex absently.

He glanced at the stranger and saw he was watching.

Holding hazel eyes, for some reason Justin's cock stiffened in its cage.

"Friendly," the man commented softly. "Are you sharing?"

"He's yours tonight."

...

Justin curled up at the stranger's feet once they reached the Sap's special party room. Soundproofed walls. Mirrors everywhere. Already some of the guests were getting it on with Sap's special entertainers. All young like Justin.

He could feel the client's eyes on him from time to time as he slouched in his seat and watched calmly. He didn't take any of the offered drinks or drugs, Justin noticed.

"Does that hurt?"

Justin looked down at the little leather cock sheath the Sap insisted he wear for titillation. "No. Just makes it harder to..."

"Can I touch it?"

Justin swallowed. "...All right. But there are rules: you can touch, as long as you're gentle, and I'll suck you off, but I won't go any further. And absolutely no kissing. If you try for more, I can and will hurt you."

"I believe you." An almost smile on the closed face. "I'm Brian."

Brian offered his big palm and Justin took it, perching delicately on the man's silk trouser encased knee.

"I'd rather not give you my name," Justin said primly, avoiding Brian's quizzical gaze.

A long gentle finger ran down the leather surrounding Justin's cock. "Fine by me. Only you don't seem to blend in with the other party guests, so I'll call you...Sunshine."

Justin bit back a moan when Brian grazed the sensitive head of his penis.

"You liked it when he rubbed his boot against you in the car..."

Justin gasped at another oblique touch. He could come in the device, though when he did his climax was sustained...almost painfully intense.

"Lie on your back on the floor."

"Uh."

"Trust me."

For some reason, even though most of the guests at the Sap's parties were total sleaze, this man seemed different, so Justin did as he asked.

"I'm going to get you off."

"I'm supposed to do that for you," Justin said, a little disgruntled. This wasn't how it was supposed to play out.

"You have a very expressive face. I want to see you come..."

Justin opened his legs and put them alongside Brian's chair, leaving himself exposed. On the mirror above the sunken living room, he could see himself reflected, eyes lined with shimmering blue and gold, lips rubbed with just a hint of pink, a little gold chain around his slim waist sparkling with rhinestones.

Brian took off his boot and black sock before placing his bare foot against Justin's trussed sex, nudging delicately.

Justin gasped.

"If you want relief, push back against my foot," Brian instructed, prodding gently until Justin couldn't help but push his bound and swollen cock up against the lightly teasing foot.

Brian rubbed rhythmically, almost soothingly.

"You're very responsive."

...

Justin lost track of time. Feet passed his head. Sex sounds. Drug smell. His body an instrument played by a master. He gave himself as he never had before, pushing up into the most advantageous position and thrusting against the poised sole of a stranger's foot.

It was humiliating, but oddly that only made him burn hotter.

"Good boy," Brian praised as he gazed at him calmly. "You need to get off, don't you?"

"Yes! Fuck." The leather translated sensation over his swollen prick into the hot lick of both pain and pleasure. He thrust shamelessly, seeing himself reflected in the mirror, slutty, panting--

He spurted relief, crying out, back arched, come on his stomach and Brian's foot, as Brian kept rubbing...

...

"It's all right, it's only water. See?" Brian sipped some and then passed the bottle of Aquafina to Justin who sniffed it before gulping some down. Brian had removed his coat and was sitting on the floor with Justin cradled between his legs.

Justin leaned against the larger man, watching groggily as Brian used a clean handkerchief to clean him up.

"I want to hire you again, Sunshine," Brian whispered in his ear as he smoothed Justin's sweaty hair back from his forehead.

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Continued in Say the Word: Irreversible
 
 
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csmars[info]csmars on March 14th, 2008 04:30 pm (UTC)
omg, first commentor!! sorry... it's just this has never happened to me before.

but yay!!! i love new stories!!!!!! and this one is so sexy and intriguing!! can't wait!
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aschicca: QaF_B-J hotel bed[info]aschicca on March 14th, 2008 04:31 pm (UTC)
*speechless from hotness overload* GUH!

If he happens to hire him again will you let us know please? ;)

Seriously hot!
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velvetwhip: Gabrielle Spring by jans_intentions[info]velvetwhip on March 14th, 2008 04:31 pm (UTC)
This is very hot, my dear! Thanks so much for sharing! It lit up a grey, gloomy morning!


Gabrielle
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harlequinfay666[info]harlequinfay666 on March 14th, 2008 04:33 pm (UTC)
:loves it:
all ur stories are such teases lol..i love em and this one is hot haha...I love client Brian
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eliriel: ( QAF ) BJ petting A[info]eliriel1 on March 14th, 2008 04:38 pm (UTC)
WOW, that's absolutely hot.I feel good,special...somehow.The very image of Brian's foot rubbing against Justin sex is pure erotism.Thrilled for more of this one.
Huggles,
Liri
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on March 14th, 2008 04:56 pm (UTC) Expand
Dogs have owners, Cats have staff...: brian at babylon with confetti[info]furriboots on March 14th, 2008 04:40 pm (UTC)
Oh my goodness but this is just so hot and amazing. I love how Brian turns the tables on Justin so he is the one giving the pleasure. After that experience, if I were Justin, I would be agreeing to be hired by Brian!

You have to continue this.
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on March 14th, 2008 05:10 pm (UTC) Expand
monjinator: Quote Doing my Boyfriend[info]monjinator on March 14th, 2008 04:40 pm (UTC)
Mmmmmm, hot. I liked the combination of No-nonsenes-there-are-rules Justin and slutty give-me-just-a-little-more-friction Justin. Very very nice. :D
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[info]sheira66 on March 14th, 2008 04:49 pm (UTC)
GAAAAACKKKKKKKK...you KNOW how much I love sub Justin fics you naughty girl you...can't wait for more.
hugs
sheira
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on March 14th, 2008 05:15 pm (UTC) Expand
litlemspowerful: justin sexyasfuck[info]litlemspowerful on March 14th, 2008 04:54 pm (UTC)
WHOAH
Oh, Jan!

*standing in front of wind machine*

That was fucking all kinds of delicious!

I'll be posting mine this weekend.

xoxo
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nolyana: Mine![info]nolyana on March 14th, 2008 05:07 pm (UTC)
HOT!!

*puts head in freezer*
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pamelakinney[info]pamelakinney on March 14th, 2008 05:13 pm (UTC)
OMG

That's was so so hot that i'm speachless :o

Very good work.

Kisses!
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on March 14th, 2008 06:21 pm (UTC) Expand
lucsmom[info]lucsmom on March 14th, 2008 05:28 pm (UTC)
Yowza! That was hot! I'm gonna take a cold shower now.
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Jackie[info]j_rea on March 14th, 2008 06:04 pm (UTC)
That was great!
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ronjamaus[info]ronjamaus on March 14th, 2008 06:14 pm (UTC)
Please, please make a new story out of this! I'm absolutly fascinated by this chapter. Justin as a whore, the Sap as his pimp and Brian as his client! This story has so much potential and I can't imagine someone better to write it than you! I think QAF did not deal very well with this whole "Justin as Saps table dancer"-idea. I mean, Justin was nearly raped in the show, but nobody took revenge on the Sap. Maybe you could bring this to a more satisfying end!? Besides, I love stories with a hurt/poor/submissive whore Justin and a dominant/protective john Brian.
Hope to see an update soon, ronjamaus.
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crazyevildru[info]crazyevildru on March 14th, 2008 07:06 pm (UTC)
oooooo this was soooo nummy! it really SHOULD be a series- i really dig au's with slut/whore justin... i'm sick, I know, but then brian can save him and it's so sweet!

this was scrumptious!
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on March 14th, 2008 07:23 pm (UTC) Expand
~Alice~[info]vinniebatman on March 14th, 2008 07:11 pm (UTC)
Whoa, very hot and naughty. I liked it.

::coughs::

If you decide to continue this, I sure wouldn't mind.

I'm sure Justin wouldn't mind, either.

~Alice~
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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on March 14th, 2008 09:49 pm (UTC) Expand
sunshine63: angel[info]sunshine63 on March 14th, 2008 07:13 pm (UTC)
wow.... that was HOT!
so intriguing, so unusual, Justin being kind of a hustler! Brian is a real surprise: the way he wants to "please" Justin, the way he's asking for another round... there a sense of protection "Brian had removed his coat and was sitting on the floor with Justin cradled between his legs." uhm...
*I'd like to be there for next round*
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michele659: B/J lovesex[info]michele659 on March 14th, 2008 07:44 pm (UTC)
You have to continue this story! It is much too hot and sexy not to!
I also see great possibility for angst - and romance:)
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randysgirl_645: kissable lips[info]randysgirl_645 on March 14th, 2008 08:15 pm (UTC)
that was hot *thud* I would so read this if you decided to turn into a series ; )
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Magdalene[info]masterglory on March 14th, 2008 08:31 pm (UTC)
One of the hottest things I've ever read...no sold out, please, keep on, I lllove it, you're the best, as always^^ I'll wait for [info]litlemfpowerful's, kisses to you both for now^____^
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tdorian[info]tdorian on March 14th, 2008 08:36 pm (UTC)
well, this one was very hot ! do you plan to write more of this ? Aida
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celeste3028: Justin[info]celeste3028 on March 14th, 2008 09:19 pm (UTC)
Hate the Sap, always did, always will. Watching 501, i always thought Brian had something to do with the Sap being caught by the feds and losing Babylon. It might have taken years to catch up but the Sap should have paid for taken advantage of everybody who didn't get a change to fight back. I am 100% sure that Brian knew what had almost happened at the Sap party and instead of getting violent, he hurt the Sap where it hurt the most, his rep and finances.

If you continue with this story, hurt the Sap please...*grins*

Oh and i love the banner...Kudos [info]furriboots

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(no subject) - [info]jans_intentions on March 14th, 2008 09:55 pm (UTC) Expand
starlightbj[info]starlightbj on March 14th, 2008 09:37 pm (UTC)
Delicious. Justin melted under Brian's command. yay!
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shadownyc: kyuukumber - 512 - B/J post sex[info]shadownyc on March 14th, 2008 09:47 pm (UTC)
I love this idea! It promises to be very YUMMY!!!
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rosy5000: BJ Tongue!Dancing[info]rosy5000 on March 14th, 2008 10:18 pm (UTC)
OOooooo!!! That was so very hot! I love Justin as a hustler. :D And I love how Brian was so gentle with him. Hope to see Brian hiring him again. ;D
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